Showing posts with label character descriptions. Show all posts
Showing posts with label character descriptions. Show all posts

Monday, July 15, 2013

A Full Cast of Characters

In any good romantic novel, play, or movie there is always a clearly defined hero and heroine. But no story would be complete without an accompanying cast, and The Runaway Duchess is no exception.

I've always loved reading (and writing) character driven stories. In The Runaway Duchess, you will get a chance to meet not only the hero (Gavin Graystone) and his feisty heroine (Charlotte Vanderley) but their friends and family as well.

In the Wedded Women Quartet readers are introduced to four best friends, women who grew close to each other in school and maintained that close relationship through heartbreak, husbands, marriages, and children. In The Runaway Duchess Charlotte has one best friend who she turns to when she needs advice, or simply a shoulder to cry on.

Short and plump and perfectly adorable with blond ringlets, rosy cheeks, and dancing blue eyes Dianna had been friends with Charlotte since childhood and the two women rarely went a day without seeing each other. [TRD excerpt, Chapter Two] 

Normally quiet and reserved and unfailingly proper, Dianna finds herself in unfamiliar territory when she wakes up in Charlotte's room after attending a masquerade ball the night before. 

       Dianna sat up on one elbow and squinted blearily in Charlotte’s general direction. Her hair was a halo of messy blond curls around her face and she was still wearing her costume; Charlotte having been unable to peel her out of it before she collapsed into bed upon their return.  “I was foxed, you say?” She pursed her lips. “I have never been foxed before. Did I enjoy myself?”
“Immensely.”
“How do you know?”
Charlotte paused in the act of plucking yet another dress from the depths of the armoire. Frowning, she held it up and tried to gauge the color in the dim lighting. Was it navy blue or plum purple? “How did I know what?” she asked absently.
“That I had indulged in too much champagne.”
“You hung out of the carriage window on the way home and burst into song.” Blue, she decided. Most definitely blue. Folding it in half, she tossed it on top of the others and reached inside for one more.
“I did not,” Dianna breathed.
“You most certainly did.” Charlotte popped out of the armoire holding a traveling cloak to her chest. “Since I was the one who had to pull you back inside before you killed yourself, I should know better than anyone.”
“I was a hoyden,” Dianna said, not sounding entirely displeased by the notion.
“Of the first order,” Charlotte agreed. [TRD excerpt, Chapter Ten]

There is also Charlotte's mother (Bettina Vanderley), a woman who, at heart, wants the best for her daughter but doesn't always go about it in the best of ways. 

“I will not marry him.” Standing with her arms crossed and her jaw set, twenty-one-year-old Charlotte Vanderley shook her head from side to side, sending her unruly mass of red curls whipping across her face. “He is old and grotesque and I would not want him if he were the last man on earth!”
“Pin your hair up dear, you look like a heathen.” Unimpressed by her daughter’s belligerence, Lady Bettina Vanderley sipped her tea and smoothed a wrinkle from her skirts. Always impeccably dressed and well put together, nothing grated on Bettina’s nerves quite like a coiffure that was loose or a stay that was not pulled tight.
A woman of quiet reserve and a spine of steel, she blamed every single one of her gray hairs on Charlotte and often wondered what she had done so wrong to deserve such a troublesome child. There was no denying the girl her beauty (and for that Bettina took full credit) but as for everything else… Well, it was well known the late Lord Vanderley had always been much too indulgent with his only daughter. And this, Bettina thought sourly as she took in Charlotte’s flushed cheeks and the rebellious gleam in her hazel eyes, is the result. [TRD excerpt, Chapter One]

Gavin's closest friend (not that he would ever admit to having one) is Ernie, his valet. A plucky, humorous fellow, Ernie plays a small (albeit very important) part in bringing Gavin and Charlotte together, as seen from this small excerpt. 

 Ernie had never seen his boss in such a state before, snapping orders left and right. Something had certainly gotten up under his britches, and he was pretty sure he knew what – or rather, who – that was.
He just never thought he would live to see the day the notoriously hard hearted Gavin Graystone fell in love. And to fall for such a slip of a girl… Ernie grinned. He wondered how long it would take for his boss to figure out he had taken the big jump. Gavin was a tough man. Some would even say a cruel one, although he certainly had his reasons, though few were privy to them.
Rocking back on his heels Ernie crossed his arms and rubbed his chin where a pitiful excuse for a beard grew. He tugged it thoughtfully.
He owed Gavin his life, a debt he had been struggling to repay for nearly half a decade, ever since Gavin lifted him up – quite literally – from the gutter, shook the filth from his clothes, and made him his person valet (among other less glamorous job titles). Maybe, at long last, he’d finally found a way to repay him… if his new bride was agreeable, of course. [TRD excerpt, Chapter Thirteen]

Other character's pop up throughout the novel [Dianna's eccentric aunt, the nefarious duke to which Charlotte is unwillingly engaged, and Gavin's butler, to name a few] but hopefully these three piqued your interest. And don't forget, The Runaway Duchess will be available on Amazon TOMORROW! So look for it then. :) 

Monday, February 27, 2012

Guess the character!

No matter what type of book you set out to write [romance, YA, action/adventure, horror] you are going to have characters... and you are going to have to describe those characters to the reader. This seems like an easy enough concept, but it's just one of those things (like riding a unicycle or jumping a horse) that looks easy until you try it yourself. Then it sucks and you wonder why you ever thought you could do it in the first place.

The problem arises when you try to describe how you, as the author see your character(s), to your readers. As the one who created Johnny you have such a clear picture of him in your mind. What he looks like. How his voice sounds. His wittiness and overall perfection. Except you can't write "Johnny had dreamy blue eyes, brown hair, and was really, really awesome" because that would be bad writing not do your character justice. You also want to watch out for "descriptive writer cliches"... the character looking in a mirror and describing what they see being one of them. So what is the best way to make your characters jump off the page? Well, the good news and the bad news is there is no right answer (although there do seem to be quite a few wrong ones).

In an attempt to strengthen my own writing, I have been flipping back through some favorite books of mine and reading how the author described their characters. Because I am a lame and boring person I thought it was actually kind of fun, and because I assume everyone is as lame and boring as me I thought it would be even MORE fun (back off, grammar police.. this is my blog and I'll do what I want to) to make it into a game. So behold... GUESS THE CHARACTER! (I know, I know... I am a game naming genius!)


Guess the Character Rules

1) Every Monday I will post a character description directly from one of my favorite books. This book could be anything - historical romance, YA dystopian, high end fantasy... I like a lot of stuff.
2) If you think you know who the description is describing, name the character, the author, and the book you think it came out of. 
3) No cheating! Cause winners never cheat and cheaters never win. I know this is true because I saw it on a bumper sticker. 
4) Winners will be announced every Wednesday. Your reward will be a direct link to your blog or website.  
 
 Sound like fun? You know it does! Okay, here we go...  

"Perhaps it had something to do with living in a dark cupboard, but ******* had always been small and skinny for his age. He looked even smaller and skinnier than he really was because all he had to wear were odd clothes of *******, and ******** was about four times bigger than he was. ******* had a thin face, knobbly knees, black hair, and bright green eyes. He wore round glasses held together with a lot of Scotch tape because of all the times ******** had punched him on the nose. The only thing ****** liked about his own appearance was a very thin scar on his forehead that was shaped like a bolt of lightening."

 * Names will always be removed to make it harder, although this one is pretty easy.